Atlantis Rising (Warriors of Poseidon #1) by Alyssa Day

Series: Warriors of Poseidon #1
Narrator: Joshua Swanson
three-stars
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Warriors of Poseidon #1
Alyssa Day
Paranormal Romance; Urban Fantasy
Tantor Audio
May 23, 2011
audibook
304 pages

Eleven thousand years ago, before the seas swallowed the Atlanteans, Poseidon assigned a few chosen warriors to act as sentinels for humans in the new world. There was only one rule-desiring them was forbidden. But rules were made to be broken...

When she calls...
Riley Dawson is more than a dedicated Virginia Beach social worker. She's blessed with a mind link that only Atlanteans have been able to access for thousands of years. Being an "empath" may explain her wistful connection to the roiling waves of the ocean, the sanctuary it provides, and the sexual urges that seem to emanate from fathoms below...

He will come.
Conlan, the High Prince of Atlantis, has surfaced on a mission to retrieve Poseidon's stolen trident. Yet something else has possessed Conlan: the intimate emotions-and desires-of a human. Irresistibly drawn to the uncanny beauty, Conlan soon shares more than his mind. But in the midst of a battle to reclaim Poseidon's power, how long can a forbidden love last between two different souls from two different worlds?

 

This book had an interesting premise featuring Atlantis mythology.

Basically, eleven thousand years ago, a certain sect of the supernatural world (The Reisen) desired to rule mankind. They began by implanting vampires in Congress and shapeshifters in the media. Poseidon, the sea god, picked his fiercest warriors to protect earth and mankind because after the Supernaturals had revealed their existence to the world, they had pledged to maintain a separation. As the Atlantis was consumed by the sea and lost to human eyes, the Risen made their move on mankind and also stole Poseidon’s Trident. Conlan, the Prince of Atlantis was tasked with retrieving the stolen Trident as well as push back the Reisen.

On his expedition to Virgina Beach, Conlan felt a mind connection with a woman who was being assaulted by three thugs. Conlan rescued the social worker Riley Dawson and discovered she was an empath who could read and feel the thoughts of others. Their mind meld also included a fierce physical attraction and from then on, it was just a matter of time before Conlan and Riley gave into their passion.

Book 1 was narrated by Joshua Swanson, who is new to me. I didn’t enjoy his delivery. His voices for the various characters made them seem more like caricature. But part of the blame lies with dialogue written by the author. It’s like Alyssa Day couldn’t decide if she wanted formal ancient speak or current slang speech. So, she just mixed it up which was odd and bewildering. But the narration was just one of number of problems in this novel.

Another issue was that I just didn’t think Alyssa Day advanced the idea very far in this book. This first book usually introduces the reader to a universe, key characters and set up plots for other books. Here, the reader met Prince of Atlantis, his seven most trusted warrior followers and Day very lightly laid the foundation for her series on the lost (hidden) city of Atlantis. The plot and the subplots were barely addressed in this book.

Lastly, I had a hard time truly connecting with the characters. Riley seemed to be a strong heroine with a kind and nurturing heart. Conlan seemed one dimensional as an alpha warrior. I just didn’t feel their chemistry. The other warriors, Alesios, Denal, Bastien, Justice, Ven, Christophe and Brennan all seem to be intriguing characters. I hope that the subsequent books will flesh them out as well as address the villains: Anubisa, Barrabas and Drakos much better than in this series starter. Despite the inconsistency in the writing, this plot and the series has potential. I will check out audiobook 2 and hope there will be more substance.

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